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Amanda Nowlin's avatar

I remember reading this, but I forgot what happened! Looking forward to the next part.

Tom Hames's avatar

Thanks Amanda.

Janet S Abadir's avatar

I love how you capture their emotions and personality so quickly. I have never written fiction but I love a good story!

Tom Hames's avatar

I appreciate the comment Janet.

C.J. Heck's avatar

That's an intriguing start, Tom, and I look forward to the other parts. You're a good writer.